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    W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

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    Derek S

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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Derek S on Fri Mar 07, 2014 1:10 pm

    Card looks awesome. One thought on language
    EVASIVE 1
    Add 1 to Darrin Razorbeak's defense value when he rolls defense dice against attacks from non-adjacent figures.

    would this be better, mirrored from Evasive 3

    When Darrin Razorbeak rolls defense dice against an attacking figure who is not adjacent, add 1 defense die to the roll.
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Huskies16 on Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:52 pm

    On card... 'this space may be 4 levels higher'... higher than what...
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Lord Kai on Mon Mar 10, 2014 1:21 am

    Huskies16 wrote:On card... 'this space may be 4 levels higher'... higher than what...

    4 Levels higher than the original space.

    I was following the text from Gain the High Ground from the Granite Guardians.

    http://www.heroscapers.com/community/gallery/files/2/hs_sew10_graniteguardians_2_original.jpg
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    Post  Nomad on Fri Mar 14, 2014 8:01 pm

    Derek wrote:EVASIVE 1
    Add 1 to Darrin Razorbeak's defense value when he rolls defense dice against attacks from non-adjacent figures.

    would this be better, mirrored from Evasive 3

    When Darrin Razorbeak rolls defense dice against an attacking figure who is not adjacent, add 1 defense die to the roll.

    Yes - I think it would be a good idea to mirror the language from the Sneaks.
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Nomad on Mon Mar 17, 2014 8:13 pm

    Per the suggestions to the changes in wording . . .

    Can we please add this to the OP for easy access if this meets approval? It saves me a bunch of time creating the card.

    DARRIN RAZORBEAK

    Figure: Pathfinder, Skull & Shackles, #026 Jakaw Razorbeak

    General: Einar
    Planet: Marr

    Species: Raptorian
    Type: Unique Hero
    Class: Rogue
    Personality: Reckless
    Size: Medium 4
    60 Points

    Life = 4
    Move = 6
    Range = 1
    Attack = 3
    Defense = 3

    DOUBLE STRIKE
    If Darrin Razorbeak starts his turn engaged, he may attack one additional time.

    ACROBATIC ASSAULT
    When Darrin Razorbeak attacks an opponent's figure, before rolling attack dice, Darrin Razorbeak may move 1 space. This space may be up to 4 levels higher. When Darrin Razorbeak attacks a figure that he was not adjacent to at the start of the turn he receives 1 additional attack die. Darrin Razorbeak may use Acrobatic Assault each time he attacks.

    EVASIVE 1
    When Darrin Razorbeak rolls defense dice against an attacking figure who is not adjacent, add 1 defense die.


    Bio: Pending
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    Post  Nomad on Mon Mar 24, 2014 12:40 am

    Try #2. Thanks for the feedback on the first master card attempt. Let me know how this one works out.

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    Post  Lord Kai on Mon Mar 24, 2014 1:26 am


    Looks good!
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    Post  Derek S on Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:39 pm

    Looks great.
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Derek S on Thu Mar 27, 2014 8:36 am

    The Book of Darrin Razorbeak

    NWHC WAVE 2-



    - Rulings and Clarifications -
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    - Combinations and Synergies -

    Synergy Benefits Offered
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    Synergy Benefits Received
    - Beakface Sneaks : Flocking

    As a Raptorian, the Darrin Razorbeak can move via the Beakface Sneaks' Flocking special power.
    - Reckless Hero Bonding: Barbary Corsairs
    Being a Small or Medium Hero with the Reckless personality, Darrin Razorbeak may benefit from the Barbary Corsairs RECKLESS HERO BONDING activation bonus.

    Synergy Imposed
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    Post  Nomad on Sat Apr 19, 2014 12:20 pm

    Is Darrin good to go?

    I thoroughly read through everything again. I propose we consider this guy Final after the bio is completed.
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    Post  Lord Kai on Sat Apr 19, 2014 2:04 pm

    He's looking good.

    Acrobatic Assault has been through a few revisions but I think it is worded well now. I haven't play-tested him myself as a Pirate Bonder - but I am glad he's with the Pirates so he'll get more play time : P
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    Post  Derek S on Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:04 pm

    Looks good to be final IMHO.
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Lord Kai on Sun May 04, 2014 1:31 pm

    First pass at BIO:

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    Darrin Razorbeak

    The Raptorians are known for both their incredible stealth and incredible desire for wealth.  Some Raptorians, like the Warwitch measures wealth through slaves while others seek greatness through demonstrations of skill and thievery.

    The Razorbeak clan is a flock of renown thieves and acrobats, who have mastered a unique fighting style that incorporates elaborate gymnastics with Florentine sword fighting.  The powerful lean muscled Raptorians mix their limited glide ability to dart, dive, soar, and strike in a flurry of motion.  The whirling blade masters strike from many angles and their uncanny speed allows them to flank opponents.

    One such master of the Razobeak clan was given the name “Darrin” by General Einar.  Darrin was a wild and reckless member of his clan, constantly pushing the limits of his elders in search of the next treasure and the next daredevil quest.  Darrin had gathered a following of Beakface Sneaks and their raids on Marr were legendary though not coordinated with any cause other than his own.  Unfortunately for Darrin, his luck on Marr ran out when he stumbled on a rockery of Vipers.  The anger of the Viper incited wave upon wave of serpentine rage, and Darrin would have been slain along with his fellow rogue Raptorians if it was not for Einar’s intervention.

    Now on Valhalla, Darrin Razorbeak serves Einar as a way to repay the debt of gratitude for giving him another chance.  With his bold leadership and surprising prowess in battle, the Raptorians on Valhalla have new inspiration.  

    But Darrin still holds a grudge against the Vipers, and does not trust that his alliance is the right one.  In the recent conflicts in Braunglayde, Darrin has encountered the Corsairs of the Barbary Coast.  His reckless heart and lust for treasure may lure him to a new adventure on the side of Utgar.  After all, there is no honor among thieves.
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Derek S on Mon May 05, 2014 7:30 am

    Cool.
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Lord Kai on Thu May 08, 2014 12:02 am


    OP Updated with Stats and Bio.

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    Post  Nomad on Thu Feb 05, 2015 9:33 pm

    Darrin Razorbeak
    NWHC WAVE 2 - Reinforcements of the Taunting Tide - Heroes of Balearia

     

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    Figure: Pathfinder, Skull & Shackles, #026 Jakaw Razorbeak

    General: Einar
    Planet: Marr

    Species: Raptorian
    Type: Unique Hero
    Class: Rogue
    Personality: Reckless
    Size: Medium 4
    60 Points

    Life: 4
    Move: 6
    Range: 1
    Attack: 3
    Defense: 3

    DOUBLE STRIKE
    If Darrin Razorbeak starts his turn engaged, he may attack one additional time.

    ACROBATIC ASSAULT
    When Darrin Razorbeak attacks an opponent's figure, before rolling attack dice, Darrin Razorbeak may move 1 space. This space may be up to 4 levels higher. When Darrin Razorbeak attacks a figure that he was not adjacent to at the start of the turn he receives 1 additional attack die. Darrin Razorbeak may use Acrobatic Assault each time he attacks.

    EVASIVE 1
    When Darrin Razorbeak rolls defense dice against an attacking figure who is not adjacent, add 1 defense die.


    Character Bio:
    The Raptorians are known for both their incredible stealth and incredible desire for wealth. Some Raptorians, like the Warwitch measures wealth through slaves while others seek greatness through demonstrations of skill and thievery.

    The Razorbeak clan is a flock of renown thieves and acrobats, who have mastered a unique fighting style that incorporates elaborate gymnastics with Florentine sword fighting. The powerful lean muscled Raptorians mix their limited glide ability to dart, dive, soar, and strike in a flurry of motion. The whirling blade masters strike from many angles and their uncanny speed allows them to flank opponents.

    One such master of the Razobeak clan was given the name “Darrin” by General Einar. Darrin was a wild and reckless member of his clan, constantly pushing the limits of his elders in search of the next treasure and the next daredevil quest. Darrin had gathered a following of Beakface Sneaks and their raids on Marr were legendary though not coordinated with any cause other than his own. Unfortunately for Darrin, his luck on Marr ran out when he stumbled on a rockery of Vipers. The anger of the Viper incited wave upon wave of serpentine rage, and Darrin would have been slain along with his fellow rogue Raptorians if it was not for Einar’s intervention.

    Now on Valhalla, Darrin Razorbeak serves Einar as a way to repay the debt of gratitude for giving him another chance. With his bold leadership and surprising prowess in battle, the Raptorians on Valhalla have new inspiration.

    But Darrin still holds a grudge against the Vipers, and does not trust that his alliance is the right one. In the recent conflicts in Braunglayde, Darrin has encountered the Corsairs of the Barbary Coast. His reckless heart and lust for treasure may lure him to a new adventure on the side of Utgar. After all, there is no honor among thieves.


    - Rulings and Clarifications -

    - N/A

    - Combinations and Synergies -

    Synergy Benefits Offered

    - N/A

    Synergy Benefits Received

    -Beakface Sneaks : Flocking
    As a Raptorian, the Darrin Razorbeak can move via the Beakface Sneaks' Flocking special power.

    -Reckless Hero Bonding: Barbary Corsairs
    Being a Small or Medium Hero with the Reckless personality, Darrin Razorbeak may benefit from the Barbary Corsairs RECKLESS HERO BONDING activation bonus.

    Synergy Imposed

    - N/A
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    Re: W2 Darrin Razorbeak - released

    Post  Nomad on Sun Feb 08, 2015 1:16 pm

    Darrin has his own post on HS . . .

    http://www.heroscapers.com/community/showpost.php?p=2001712&postcount=157

    Kai, copy the previous post into the OP if you want to update it. Thanks.

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