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    W1 Gammacron RELEASED.

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    Is Gammacron finalized and ready for release?

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    Post  Derek S Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:01 pm

    I don't see the need for another card- I like it as is.


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    Post  Derek S Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:57 am

    Card and bio are done.  Gammacron is ready to be voted on for release.
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    Post  Nomad Mon Aug 26, 2013 9:19 am

    Here is a new card for Gammacron. I noticed that I didn't capitalize the special powers in my first attempt.

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    Post  Derek S Tue Aug 27, 2013 12:06 am

    Card looks awesome. Let me know if you all have any suggestions for the bio (please read Zetacron & Omegacrons' bio to see the premise). I think some editing is in order.
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    Post  Nomad Sun Sep 01, 2013 11:53 pm

    Derek wrote:Bio:  Gammacron moves across the battlefield, pressure building until he stops and whoosh, a release of stored energy removes one of the red dots of his internal network, giving Gammacron a clearer signal to his allies, boosting their targeting functions.   Soon, no red dots are near, but his internal network picks up a fast moving dot approaching, Gammacron spins and releases his missiles taking out the incoming dot and the red dot where it came from.
    OK, I have read through the bios of all of the Jandar soulborgs - sadly, the Repulsors don't have one. I think I know what you are after, so I offer this word-smithing suggestion:

    Bio:  Gammacron moves across the battlefield while heightened response systems continue to energize. An incoming barrage and those near appear as red dots on the monitor's circuitry. A release of stored energy removes red dots from Gammacron's internal network. Gammacron provides a clear signal to his allies and boosts their targeting capability. In defense, Gammacron spins, targets, and releases a bevy of missiles that neutralize a fast approaching dot and its origin.

    GO GAMMACRON! YOU ROCK!

    OK, that last line was in fun, it might still need some work . . .
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    Post  Derek S Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:10 am


    Bio: Gammacron moves across the battlefield while heightened response systems continue to energize. An incoming barrage and those near appear as red dots on the monitor's circuitry. A release of stored energy removes red dots from Gammacron's internal network. Gammacron provides a clear signal to his allies and boosts their targeting capability. In defense, Gammacron spins, targets, and releases a bevy of missiles that neutralize a fast approaching dot and its origin.

    This works for me. Follows Omegacron and Zetacron in theme. OP updated.
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    Post  Derek S Wed Oct 02, 2013 9:00 am

    I can live with the bio so drop the hold part with this guy.
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    Post  Nomad Tue Oct 08, 2013 7:13 pm

    Will do.
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    Post  Huskies16 Sun Oct 27, 2013 6:39 pm

    I think its great! just maybe painting some white on it so it looks closer to the other Jandar Soulborgs
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    Post  Derek S Sun Oct 27, 2013 10:42 pm

    My paint job has got more white, but too much. Damon's looks better.
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    Post  Derek S Sun Feb 23, 2014 12:20 am

    The Book of Gammacron

    Large Expansion Pack–Braunglayde’s Reckoning

    - Rulings and Clarifications -
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    - Combinations and Synergies -

    Synergy Benefits Offered
    -Targeting Beacon: Soulborg figures

    Soulborg figures receive an additional die to their normal attack when attacking a non-adjacent figure that is adjacent to Gammacron.  Soulborg figures with range include: Blastatrons, DeathCommander Mark 3, Deathwalker 8000, Deathwalker 9000, Major Q9, Major Q10, Omegacron, Omnicron Repulsors, Omnicron Snipers, Vulcanmech Incendiborgs, Warden 816, Zetacron, Zettian Guards, Zettian Infantry.
    -Tricky Speed 4: Otonashi
    As a tricky figure, Gammacron may benefit Otonashi in her TRICKY SPEED 4 movement bonus.

    Synergy Benefits Received
    -Omnicron Mobilization: Omegacron

    As a Soulborg figure that follows Jandar, Gammacron may be moved up to 5 spaces with Omegacron’s OMNICRON MOBILIZATION movement bonus.
    -Targeting Beacon: Omnicron Repulsors
    As a Soulborg figure that follows Jandar, Gammacron may benefit from the Omnicron Repulsors TARGETING BEACON attack bonus.
    -Queen of Thieves: Elaria the Pale
    As a tricky figure, Gammacron may benefit from Elaria the Pale's QUEEN OF THIEVES 20-sided die roll enhancement.
    Synergy Imposed
    -Energy Expulsion- Soulborg figures

    After revealing an order marker an moving Gammacron, you must roll the 20-sided dice for each adjacent figure.  You may add 2 to roll if the figure is a Soulborg.  Squad figure’s receive a wound on a roll of 15 or higher, Hero’s on a roll of 18 or higher. Soulborg squad figures include: Blastatrons, Deathreavers, Deathstalkers, Gladiatrons, Omnicron Repulsors, Omnicron Snipers, Vulcanmech Incendiborgs, Zettian Guards, Zettian Infantry.  Soulborg Hero figures include: Deathcommander Mark 3, Deathwalker 7000, Deathwalker 8000, Deathwalker 9000,  Hoplitron, Major Q9, Major Q10, Major X17, Omegacron, Warden 816, Zetacron.


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    Post  Nomad Sun Feb 23, 2014 12:19 pm

    As a tricky figure, Gammacron receives a benefit from Elaria the Pale's Queen of Thieves special power.
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    Post  Derek S Sun Feb 23, 2014 1:48 pm

    Thank you, post updated.
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    Post  Nomad Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:19 pm

    new and improved card . . .

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    Post  Nomad Fri Feb 06, 2015 11:25 pm

    Gammacron has his own post on HS

    http://www.heroscapers.com/community/showpost.php?p=2001423&postcount=129

    Let me know if you see anything that needs to be improved/changed.

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